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From The Ground. by ~Barnicals:iconBarnicals:



The world is a changing place,
A changing surface.
Mans hand has played so many roles in this.
The decimation of land and crops.
A thousand faceless soldiers marching forth to the orchestrated War.
A thousand instruments of battle.
Played like a hand of cards,
A gamble.
A chance.
It is this that appeals to the madmen at the head of the machine,
I think.
Steps to the beat of drums,
Across charred lands they march.
Rows of columns await those that might just survive,
To walk amongst and receive their medals.

A comrade catches the eye of his brother as they charge across broken earth.
Armour weighs,
It slows,
But it is the very thing that might just save one.
Staring grimly ahead.
The enemy has always seemed lesser;
An ant to be crushed.
Not so when faced in their masses.
©2006-2009 ~Barnicals
:iconbarnicals:

Author's Comments

It's funny how people in the upper echelons of society are blind to the possible suffering that the lower class and the third world, sometimes brought on by those same bigwigs.

Makes you think.

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:iconshealtiel:
That's how it has been I suppose. I like the poem though; I can easily imagine it to a steady beat of a drum. There just seems to be rythm I can not explain when reading it, did you intend to do that?
:iconshelagnoa:
The last stanza is the best. :nod: Love the wonderful imagery! :bulletblue:

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:iconcinnamon-pretzels:
Cool poem :) I like it ^^ V. talented, you n.n

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:iconbarnicals:
Sort of. I was thinking of war drums when I wrote it, so it might have just subconciously come out. I dunno.

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:iconbarnicals:
Thank you! Not so keen on the last line though.

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Shaun Of The Dead kicks ass!

"You've got red on you."
:iconbarnicals:
You're nice. :hug:

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Shaun Of The Dead kicks ass!

"You've got red on you."
:iconshelagnoa:
Actually, the last line was one of my favorites. :hmm: :bulletblue:

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:iconbarnicals:
Oh. Well... Kewl. Lol.

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Shaun Of The Dead kicks ass!

"You've got red on you."

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