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Arise, oh exquisite morning,
Like none to be believed,
Dawn breaking over mountain tips,
The morning star still seen.

Birds arise and greet the day,
As dew and grass embrace.
But alas,
I must retire now,
And return to thoughts of you.

A night remembered,
Yet forever lost,
Dollars spent,
Lines were crossed.

The chaos of another day,
Brings hope and woe anew,
Yet all that I can seem to do is think of you.

Silhouettes against morning sky,
When life is not yet warm,
Yet I idle here;
Watching water bead on lawn.
©2008-2009 ~Barnicals
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Author's Comments

I don't know when I wrote this, or who it's about. Judging by my messier (than normal) writing, I can safely assume that I was rather intoxicated.

Tell me what you think of it... I have changed it from the original slightly though.

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:iconshelagnoa:
I think you did pretty darned well, especially considering you were drunk! I really like the dew visual, and how you combine the idea of dew and grass with the romance. :bulletblue:

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:iconbarnicals:
*Rereads*
My god! I did! I'm brilliant! Haha. Thanks.

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"Blow, blow, thou winter wind; thou art not as unkind as mans ingratitude."

Mark Twain.
:iconshelagnoa:
:giggle: :D :bulletblue:

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