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Oh, light of my life, my burning flame.
There when I need comfort, you cannot blame.
You have stood by me, and been my friend,
Something that none can bend.
I once said I loved you,
And I still do,
But you just smiled, and turned away,
For a while.
And again, you are my friend,
That love is still there,
A hole in my heart, it sears.
When you speak,
I feel weak,
And then you go silent,
And for I, a moment.
Sometimes my heart soars,
When you say something most would ignore.
You’re in some classes,
And those guys,
They’re asses.
Sometimes our eyes will meet,
But are pushed on, by trampling feet.
One day the world will end,
And we will be seen, sadly, I think, as naught but friends.
©2004-2009 ~Barnicals
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This one is about a girl at my school...I won't say who, but this is basically our history.

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:iconpsycho-stress:
How sweet... It is just like one of my poems.

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The message is quite different but the love experience it quite similar.

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Man you this is good, I'm godsmaked
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DUDE WOW i am speachless
now right that with your blood and tie it to a brick and throw it though her window at night
now there is a good plan
*sits back with the look of pure evil on face and throws head back in laughter mahahahahahahahahahahahaha.............. ....*
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holy hell barney...
thats deep...
are we writing about niki? ^_^

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wow.. powerful stuff... *stunned* nice way with words...

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:iconbarnicals:
He, :boogie: thanks.

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no worries

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:iconbarnicals:
Er hem....hey look, llamas! ( runs outside, and has to ignore comment)

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